"Impressive Details" | - I tutor my peers in self-fashioned strategies that have earned me a 4.42 (of 4.5) GPA and academic awards. |
 | - my GPA increased dramatically in the subsequent two years, ending with a 3.78/4 for my final year. |
 | - As the Vice President of the Student Government I have shouldered a lot of responsibility and have enjoyed being in that role. |
"Telling impressive stories" | - The hardships I had to endure as a teenager have led me to pursue a career in medicine. |
 | - I never thought that I might have to go through the same things as the injury survivors until the day I was diagnosed with [an illness]. |
 | - In the summer... I participated in a medical mission to [a country overseas]... I had worked in several clinics and hospitals prior to this particular trip, however, it was here that I believe the concepts of professionalism, honesty, and integrity truly shone... |
"Expressing expectations of reward" | - I have served. - I have volunteered.--I have given of my time. |
 | - I have worked hard.--I have contributed. |
"Statements of confidence and destiny" | - I have the confidence to say that I can be a professional physician. |
 | - These are professional codes which I will have no trouble abiding by as I exhibit professionalism in my daily activities. |
 | - I already possess many of the characteristics, skills, attitudes and behaviours which are necessary in the medical profession. |
 | - this information shows me that I will be chosen based on the required requirements of the profession of medicine. |
"Agreeing with the assumptions of the question" | - I have no doubt that I would adhere to the confidentiality, integrity, and honesty that would be expected of me as a physician. |
 | - integrity, ethics and confidentiality are extremely important to me. |